And Yet, It Moves
by Susan Nance Carhart
Solberg—a rich, individualist inventor—insists on using his time machine without
having it vetted by his staff, and he thereby falls into a trap. Perhaps I have just read
too much time travel (blasphemy!), but I feel that Carhart fell into the same trap as her
protagonist: For me, the story needed to be vetted by someone who could say how much this
particular idea needs a new twist if it’s to work.
You have a team to vet your ideas. Bring them in on this!
“And Yet, It Moves” by Susan Nance Carhart, 365 Tomorrows, 6 November 2012 [webzine].